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The Catatonic Vice by ~MrLacuna:iconMrLacuna:



Written in a blood soaked metaphor,
You seduce my dignity.
A trip wire, regrets tumble around you.
Solicit your independence,
Engage in combat.

Meek references falter,
Extend a dormant frontier.
Darkened rain seems to,
Drown you amongst friends.

A decision made with contempt
Twenty-five lions
In an over crowded nest
Line their paws with
‘Advice’
A vice best left to catatonics.  
©2005-2009 ~MrLacuna
:iconmrlacuna:

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The result of extended research.

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:iconsleepingtodeath:
wow this one really speaks to me..........i like it alot.............'A trip wire, regrets tumble around you.' fucking awsome..........

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JAMIE KING
:iconmrlacuna:
Hey, thanks. Im glad you liked it.

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Please, don't drink the emperor.
:iconsleepingtodeath:
well of course i liked it..................its good.......

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JAMIE KING
:iconmoaeltaile:
hey this is one of my favourites from you.
the first stanza was particularily good :D

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"Your second-hand smoke"

Brand New are so friggen joy I just lurve em!

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