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A Moral Dilemma by ~MrLacuna:iconMrLacuna:



Probed in all the wrong places,
You words strip me of,
An ill-conceived assurance.
A grenade in the throat,
Sarcasm separates my pupil,
In a blaze of glory.
Divided by the wreckage,
Of a thousand pubescent thoughts.
You and I stand opposed,
Spectators, armed with a morbid grin
Gleefully cheer from the depths.  
©2005-2009 ~MrLacuna
:iconmrlacuna:

Author's Comments

"I have opinions of my own --strong opinions-- but I don't always agree with them."
-George Bush

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:iconsleepingtodeath:
fucking awsome........

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JAMIE KING
:iconprecioussecret:
Either your poems are getting easier to understand or im just getting smarter and figuring them out, well not figuring them out just knowing sort of thing
:iconmoaeltaile:
Graphic,

Divided by the wreckage,
Of a thousand pubescent thoughts.


I think we can all relate to this couplet.


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"Call me a safe bet, I'm betting I'm not.
Glad that you can forgive, only hoping as time goes you can forget."

Brand New are so friggen joy I just lurve em!
:iconmrlacuna:
lol I could be pretentious and claim such things are behind me now, but thats rubbish

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Please, don't drink the emperor.
:iconmoaeltaile:
not to worry -- i cant move past the same shit i write about, its always the same. its so boring
i hate not being able to move on.


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"Call me a safe bet, I'm betting I'm not.
Glad that you can forgive, only hoping as time goes you can forget."

Brand New are so friggen joy I just lurve em!
:iconmrlacuna:
Your work is far from boring, and I'm sure you will manage to move on eventually.

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Please, don't drink the emperor.
:iconmoaeltaile:
tah

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"Your second-hand smoke"

Brand New are so friggen joy I just lurve em!

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